How easy it is, Once proximity is a memory, ... To let circumstances dictate.
I wish that I could Return us to what we were and Undo all that has happened.
I like the direction you went in your verse here. I enjoy free verse, although there are still some "rules", even with "free" verse. You traverse those well and presented this character as a full character, a character with a mystery.
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Date: 2024-08-27 12:52 am (UTC)Once proximity is a memory, ...
To let circumstances dictate.
I wish that I could
Return us to what we were and
Undo all that has happened.
I like the direction you went in your verse here. I enjoy free verse, although there are still some "rules", even with "free" verse. You traverse those well and presented this character as a full character, a character with a mystery.
- Erulisse (one L)